Monday, November 2, 2009
RJA #11a: Introduction
Have you noticed how many children that use technology these days? Technology is a growing trend for children. Kids use technology for instant messaging, social network sites, internet, texting, video games, e-mails, homework and much more. Technology has more negative effects on children’s social and writing skills because children can’t obtain social skills by interacting over the internet, when children interact with others over the internet by using instant messaging they do not always use proper English in their writing.
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Overall I thought your introduction was good although it was a little short and I thought it lacked an attention getter such as a statistic or specific example.
ReplyDeleteI liked your introduction for the most part. It was short and to the point. I know your stance on the subject just by reading the first paragraph. Possibly, instead of using a question to lure people in, maybe you could just make a bold statement. This is just a suggestion. Good work!
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